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angel_beats! nakamura_yuri naked nipples thighhighs transparent_png vector_trace

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There's a few things I'd change/fix, but overall looks a thousand times better than SciFi's.
Do it with the Rifle please!!!
WhiteExecutor said:
Do it with the Rifle please!!!
uuuuugh... I probably wiiiilllll.... won't be finished anytime soon though! I was only able to do this because I had a break from school...

And,
gohanrice said:
There's a few things I'd change/fix, but overall looks a thousand times better than SciFi's.
what would you change/fix?
JASH said:
And,what would you change/fix?
A few lines here and there look a little odd, less blur on her mouth/eyes, and there's one little part on her hair that the color goes outside the linework (our right, her left).
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The closed hand on her belly looks a little odd without the gun she held in the original. Also I clearly see a disturbing pattern at her thighhighs wich makes me think the shading uses too less colors - like a posterize filter was applied afterwards. So i clearly like SciFi's version more than this.
>>uuuuugh... I probably wiiiilllll.... won't be finished anytime soon though!

Don't worry about it. Do it when you feel like it. That these vectors got done at all is good enough.
Charly said:
I clearly see a disturbing pattern at her thighhighs.
I see it too, that should probably be fixed. If you look closely, the same issue plagues her hair as well.

Charly said:
i clearly like SciFi's version more than this.
The problem with SciFi is that he barely makes any attempt at trying to get it to look better (gradients, effects, fill/outline, stroke profiles, etc.); he just does the stroke lines, colors in, and that's about it. If he spent a little more time on his vectors, they could look great.
OMG face-palm head-desk table-flip
between her pinky and her left breast...
(/XoX)/ ~WHAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII?!
JASH said:
OMG face-palm head-desk table-flip
between her pinky and her left breast...
(/XoX)/ ~WHAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII?!
lolwut??...
WhiteExecutor said:
lolwut??...
Crappy tracing.
forgot to fill in the color in that ONE spot. DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY HOURS I SPENT SEARCHING THE FINAL IMAGE AT 500X?