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Well, this one was quite a chore to put back together... Look ok?
Did you extract it out, dutch?
If by "extract it out" you mean paint out the background and titles... yeah. Do you think it would have been better with titles and background left in?
dutchago said:
Do you think it would have been better with titles and background left in?
Nah. it'll consumes your time and result is boring :|

btw, I'll vote up for your great efforts =D
but... do you wanna hear some my critique? :)
midzki said:
Nah. it'll consumes your time and result is boring :|

btw, I'll vote up for your great efforts =D
but... do you wanna hear some my critique? :)
Yeah, would love to hear feedback / advice if you have any suggestions.
No... the background it was originally really dirty rather bad, it's quite good that you extracted it out. But since I just look for perfection more than anything else, I just like the extraction to be top notch :)

That was my only complaint. Since the outline near the girl to the right, near the butttox of her skirt outline is a litttle jaggy, zigzaggy :)
I can give you some technical advice, but first I'll say 'try to get the best result not just o.k.' :)
this one might required many tasks to you. e.g. color adjustment, descreening, stitching, extracting, redraw/repaint, ... I guess you coudn't concentlate one task and left just looking o.k. , then started next task.. but if you continuing these cycle, I think you can't reach the best.
concentlate one & master it =D
Oh, wow... I just saw that I left a huge area of her skirt completely at a rough pass stage (and I see some rough areas in the jacket just above that as well). Midzki, is that what you meant when you were talking about just "ok"? Because that looks *horrible*... Thanks for being polite!

Also, good catch aoie, I'll clean up the skirt edge a bit. That was a completely redrawn area - I thought it would look ok keeping it a bit rougher, but looking at other parts of the jacket, it really doesn't match.

Anyhow, if you have any other advice or spot any other rough areas, let me know while I continue working on this. Hopefully version 2 will look a bit better.